Lying with the sand against my back, I photographed the sky at Capitola, California. I snapped a flight of pelicans as they flew overhead. My first time to get pelicans! Usually I just get seagulls. It wasn’t until later when I viewed the images at full size that I realized one of the birds was actually a kite.
I wrote a haibun about the soaring pelicans and their strange friend on Cactus Haiku. A friend of mine loved it and encouraged me to make a t-shirt. I liked it too so first on Zazzle (because they were having a sale so I could get my sample cheaper), I created a blank notecard and mousepad with the haiku because in Zazzle, you can set it up so people can change the text if they want to. So if someone wants to change the haiku on the card to “Happy Birthday!”, they can.
Now because the mouse pad and the card are different shapes, square vs rectangle, the design had to change to accommodate the sape. Mostly I moved the text.
However, with Merch Amazon, you can’t change the text but the t-shirt printing is soooo much better than Zazzle. I really wish Zazzle did a better t-shirt printing (colors look faded) as they have such a wide variety of fashion choices for women. MerchAmazon, stylewise, is very basic. Due to the “as-is” text, instead of the haiku, I replaced the text with a simpler phrase that captures the heart of the haiku, “Fly Free”.
Also as T-shirts look better with a vertical photograph and this one happened to be horizontal (the majority of my photographs are), I played with putting it at a tilt to fill more space but also to try to capture the dynamic sense of freewheeling flight of the pelicans. I am a little worried about the placement as I would have liked to put the top corner higher but Amazon has a prescribed place where you can put your design. I’ll have get a t-shirt to check it.
So what do you think? On a t-shirt is a haiku fine? Or do you favor the simpler phrase?
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